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    Workplace of Convenience, Trap Avoidance, & Enhanced Quiver Conversions

    In the spreadsheet, Assassin's Edge indicates "melee weapon" as its target, despite the description mentioning that ranged attacks are part of its effect. I believe that this is an error -- the CMA indicates that any weapon is a valid target.
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    National Event Information for LGBT+ Players

    I'm a middle-aged cis white male who probably presents as straight in many situations, so my experience will not be that of players from more marginalized groups. I've got friends who are various flavors of NB/trans/GNF whom I want to bring into Alliance, and I've kept a close eye on the...
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    Alliance Rulebook 2.1 Draft 10

    p. 101, Unbinding Blade: the description mentions "Destruction/Stun Strike," but the skill's name is actually "Destruction/Stun Blow."
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    Alliance Rulebook 2.1 Draft 10

    Tinkering Globes, p. 85, mentions "weapon strike pin" as a possible verbal. There's no Pin Globe creatable by Tinkering.
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    Alliance Rulebook 2.1 Draft 10

    p. 31 -- the Command section of the chart in the "Removed by" column has several instances of "Break" instead of "Break Command."
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    Alliance Rulebook 2.1 Draft 10

    p. 46: Inconsistent capitalization of Spell Slots/spell slots throughout that section.
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    Alliance Rulebook 2.1 Draft 10

    p. 29, Out of Game second para: "place a first on the top of your head" should be "place a fist"
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    Alliance Rulebook 2.1 Draft 10

    p. 101: "Weapon of Interception" heading is orphaned at the bottom of the page instead of accompanying its description at the top of p. 102.
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    Alliance Rulebook 2.1 Draft 10

    P. 46, last sentence of the Gaining Skills section: You may not “combine” Experience Points from two different skill categories to satisfy these prerequisites. The quotation marks are extraneous and should be removed.
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    Alliance Rulebook 2.1 Draft for Player Review

    This would be clearer if rephrased as something like: "Items with Ritual Effects cannot be Shattered. If a magic item is hit with Shatter, it will be Broken instead (see Break), and will be unusable until Mended."
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    Alliance Rulebook 2.1 Draft for Player Review

    8: First use of "Logistics Period," for which I can't find a definition in the rulebook. 10: "Dark Elves often chose to stay in the shadowy fringes" -- should be "choose," I think, as all the other race description text is present tense. 35: Under "Qualifiers," I think this is the first use of...
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    Alliance Rulebook 2.1 Draft for Player Review

    13: Stone Elves: "most outer" should probably be "outermost" 19: Armor Evaluation: remove "a" before "costuming" 35: "An attack on the target by the caster’s companions will not immediately break the Charm but if the caster does not attempt to stop it and if no good reason is provided for the...
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    Alliance Rulebook 2.1 Draft for Player Review

    35: In the Charm description, remove the hyphen between "their-best" 36: In the Control Undead description, remove the hyphen between "voice-control". The sentence "If a target is under the Control Undead Effect to multiple people, the latest Control Undead affect them will take precedence if...
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    Alliance Rulebook 2.1 Draft for Player Review

    10: "You can buy one Goblin Blanket from each chapter each month, but a character can only receive one Goblin Blanket each month." That seems to contradict itself -- rephrase as "You can buy one Goblin Blanket per month from any chapter you wish" or similar. 11: "Make up" should be one word...
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    Alliance Rulebook 2.1 Draft for Player Review

    p. 8: "Battle Board" is sometimes one word and sometimes two.
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